Saturday, January 14, 2012

Carousel

Here is a small excerpt from Part 1 of one of my stories in-the-making, Carousel. You can read the entire piece here:

http://figment.com/books/204671-Carousel

1886
"The warehouse is silent. Dust and moonlight creep in through the vents, causing the windows to dress themselves in darkness and hide from the trees whose bare arms tap at the glass. Overgrown weeds and long, silvery grasses have, over time, wrapped themselves in and around the rotting wooden boards at the base of the building.
From inside the dark, dusty halls of the building come the faint sound of a hammer. An old man sits at a makeshift workbench, hammering at a large sheet of metal. Behind him, like a large, looming shadow, is a machine cloaked in a white canvas. The man stops his work and sighs. It is well into the night, and he had planned on finishing up hours ago. He stands and studies the draped mechanical wonder, his final masterpiece before retirement. He touches the corner of the fabric, and pulls. The canvas slides off the machine like butter on a hot dish, billowing down upon him before crumpling into a heap at his feet.
There, sitting in the middle of an abandoned warehouse, was a large and beautiful carousel."
Thanks, and feel free to check back in for more later!

1 comment:

  1. Congratulations on having this piece featured on Teen Ink by the editors! I hope all your readers will go to teen ink and look up the piece and rate it so we can see it as voted #1 by the readers. It is an excellent piece!

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